Built of intensity, minus the vengeance
A quintessential partner in crime
Rings the door bell with a bottle of wine
That man, tall, suave, magnetic and lean
Have you seen?
Who keeps the bad boys at bay
With just a raise of his sinister arch
For the super hero hidden with in
Hearts on sleeves, girls, after him march
Capable of unconditional love and care
Pursues awe and beauty, the one so rare
In whose kingdom, happiness reign
Have you seen?
Can cook, clean and carpet the floor
Calm, composed, tolerant and more
Passion would be what commitment defines
Ambience gleeful with his convivial lines
Every time he passes by,
I swear by the moon, I wouldn’t lie;
What a treat it is, to the olfactory alright!
His mysterious fragrance wild and bright
The man in the tie olive green,
Have you seen?
Quotes ridiculous cartoons, quirky movie lines
Traveling and exploring, enjoys the rains
Is simply who he claims to be
Can build a home under the tree
Waits with orchids at the rainbow end
Unsaid, unheard he’d comprehend
Raymond- The complete man, that I mean
Have you seen?
eee...:D this is out of the check-list you made!:D
ReplyDeletehaha... Raymond- the complete man :D thats legendary :)
ReplyDeleteBum: Yes! The list that we made in the classroom and that which ended in the cafeteria. :D
ReplyDeleteSourabh: It is! ;)
Hello? you write awesome! Why were you even thinking before putting these up? Loved it so much :*
ReplyDeleteAnd well, as for this complete man goes, i was floored by the description :) and how <3
Priyanka: Each of the lines have been picked up from the check list that I and my friend had made respectively! :D
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy that you liked it.
I loves you babe! <3 *winks*
the raymond thing was totally uncalled for!!! ha! you gt me there!
ReplyDeletewell written and nicely put! Thanks for sharing! and I say keep writing, to stay young at heart! :D :D
ReplyDeleteadding your blog link in mine... :) check whenever free :) here's the link...
http://www.joeyshaz.blogspot.com/
Don't forget. Keep writing! =)
Nitish: Sweet you are! :) Thanks much! :)
ReplyDeleteJyo: I add your blog too. Man! You're amazing. I never checked before.
P.s: Thanks so much. You too! <3
Wow..!! Nice choice of words..! :D :) :)
ReplyDeleteRahul: Thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteYou are most welcome..!! Keep up the good work.>! Never know what lies in front of you..!! May get an opportunity to do something great..!!:D :)
ReplyDeleteRahul: Hahaha! Right-o! Point taken :)
ReplyDelete:-) the ending was cool...'the completely cool finishing'...
ReplyDeletesuper! : )
ReplyDeleteRahul: Really? I'm humbled :) Thanks a lot :)
ReplyDeleteSwati: :*
haha.. thank you soo much gurl! <3 I never really showed that blog to any one. I just write. :P It takes like minded people to understand else they'll will read it in pig of latin and greek! :P :P and ohhh I'm sooo in <3 with your longgggg lines... nice nice... :D :D and experts comments from your end is welcomed too :D only mine says 'gibberish follows this' instead of the word 'comments' : P :P :D \m/
ReplyDeleteI really wanna know what triggered this one... *bows* What a rhyme, what lines...what a man! *sigh*
ReplyDeleteNeha: My best firend and I were on this whole new task of making a checklist to find that Mr. Right! These are points picked out from the list.
ReplyDeleteI hope someday we all meet 'him' respectively! ;)
Jeez. He sounds like a charmer.
ReplyDeleteThis was too exemplary a piece. -.-
Crystal: Tell me about it! *Sigh*
ReplyDeleteLetters to Juliet:)
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