Friday 7 November 2014

Taken

It was a tussle of scents that lingered,
Either wouldn't give up
An impression made in space
That he had been and gone
The trace of a certain perfume
Like a windchime whisper
Like your heart in a riddle
Like a printed trail of two
Like a territory marked
Like a bewildering maze of emotions.
Lost.
Like the whole world forsaken,
Like kissed and taken.


7 comments:

  1. tussle of scents: says so much those three words.

    windchime whisper... subtle can be amazing :)

    so, you found a guy?

    p.s. the words are so perfect i cant help believing them.

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  2. @Raj: Thank you! :D.

    Well, what can I say? FICTION- Makes you write.

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  3. beautifully written Greeshma! :)

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  4. Do I love this?? Yes I do ����

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  5. Sourabh: Thanks so much! :) You're so motivating every single time.

    Hari Kishan: Thank you, much appreciated! :)

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