Saturday 8 June 2013

The Ocean’s fool.


Through the haunting hall of memories
That’s now scarred of red and blacks
He walked with daggers through the back,
That he drew upon himself
Keep walking,
The owl has hooted downfall
For guilt my boy is your pal
Live with it and in death
For your own grave will call out
Of names your mind had barred.
What is your flight then?
Words? Diplomacy? Stance?
The fallen leaf you walked over,
It’s tree is hounding you now.
Your option is to run for life while you’re dead and not.
Whimpering cries of the sand,
The dark night waves have heard.
Where ever you may swim,
Your life lies at the waters’ base.
With deeds you drew upon self
Revenge is not my thing, but you,
'You' are the ocean’s fool


3 comments:

  1. exceptionally dark. gripping. and in a way very very different from even the dark genres one encounters here on blogger :)

    loved it ma'am! keep it coming

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  2. Raj: It is? I haven't read that many dark blogs. Perhaps you could link me to some? :)

    Thanks so much again. Means a lot! :)

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  3. there are no genuinely dark blogs. just normal people being dark at times. but yes. i should make one. damn. that's an idea!

    i remember this one story. and it was very well told. but no i wont be able to find it. :S

    but yes there is one story u could read. this one is my own. if u could find time, nothing like it :)
    http://scarlettd1ar1es.blogspot.in/2009_08_01_archive.html

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