Friday 25 January 2013

Replaced!


Nightmares replace dreams,
Loss substitutes for love,
Yours isn't yours, never was.
The dispute perhaps is, denial.
The winter snubs summer in the end,
The flowers are to freeze and wither,
We will meet again at the fate’s gate with no choice
Everything in the living world- Is Replaceable. Everybody!
The world’s a comedy, a dark comedy
You are its muse!
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8 comments:

  1. Prashanthsam25 January 2013 at 17:10

    I cannot say short and sweet...its short and dark.

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  2. Greeshma Ramesh26 January 2013 at 08:36

    Prashanth: Yes! Some what. :)

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  3. Neha Choudhry26 January 2013 at 11:09

    Welcome back! Blown away. It strikes the right chords.

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  4. Greeshma Ramesh26 January 2013 at 20:34

    Neha: Thank you Nehaaaa! :) Means so much! :*

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  5. Brinda Kulkarni28 January 2013 at 06:26

    you've said what you have to. :) it's beautiful. :)

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  6. Greeshma Ramesh28 January 2013 at 23:56

    Bum: I guess! :) Writing is such a relief! :) Love! <3

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  7. Unknown25 February 2013 at 05:57

    When I read this, all people of sorts crossed my mind. Yeah we are such a muse. I like the last line, quite a punch. :)

    Well written, crisp and quiet.

    love,
    -J

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  8. Greeshma Ramesh8 June 2013 at 09:39

    Jo- Indeed, we are, aren't we? Thanks much love! :)

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