Monday 14 May 2012

Let me be!


Every time the chase knocked a dead end,
A little window did open
Confiding in it to renew hope
Broken spirits I did attend

Now no window, nor door obliges
Only the towering walls that resonate
When one not can, forge and undo
The love ,the feelings- the damage’s done!

And in disguise two options destiny confers
To vault into the seas by choice, by will
Or to dance on the deck of a burning ship
Either which way, vanquish rightfully I own

I’ve sailed too far now to anchor a turn
To do away with pain, to make amends
Washed away in blood and in rain
So much that I feel pleasure in pain

Either which way, I belong in the sea...
Not do I need your help, so let me be!

8 comments:

  1. This flows... Like love.
    This seeps in... Like air.
    This breathes in freshness... Like the essence of rose.
    This is pure untouched nectar... pleading to be hugged by petals of love and jeweled by a dew drop somewhere in it's core.

    I love you. This is as perfect as it can be..

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  2. Nehaaaaaaaaaaaaa: That is so beautiful what you just wrote. Man, you have a way with words and it touches, like how! Thanks so much hon:* It's like you speak my mind! :* <3

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  3. This sure speaks of righteousness in someway, in self reliance, in faith rested somewhere deep deep inside and an acceptance not because otherwise is inevitable but that is how we roll. The freedom of choice, even when everything turns negative. Wow! amazing this one is! (like it can ever be otherwise?) :*

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  4. Priyanka: Aptly put! And you flatter me how much?! I love you :* So bloody much <3

    Neha: You're a darling :*

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  5. Hello Greeshma.
    We all need love of some kind...it's how we were brought into this world and what we were created to do. What kind of existence can one have without love, friendship or companionship? Profound piece of writing. I like your imagery too. Thanks for sharing.

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  6. Andy: How very kind! I agree with you word to word. Much appreciated. Will definitely give that a check! :) Thank you so very much! :)

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  7. I really liked the imagination in the making of this !!! Sad about the block though !!!

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